Literature Review Chapter: Lebanon Today and the Persistent Refugee Crisis, Towards a New Conflict?
One overall comment – in addition to the more specific feedback inside the document is that – to think about ways in which you can balance the two halves a bit more. In the first half, you mainly focus on the political system and power-sharing, whereas in the second half when you’re discussing Lebanon more specifically, you consider literature on a broader range of aspects, including the economy. It would be useful to consider the broader literature on these aspects in the first part, so that there’s a closer match between them. You could do this by adding one or two sub-sections in that first half.