NUR131 Concepts of Nursing 1: Assessment Task 1, NSP1, 2021
Explain how the chosen image illustrates your understanding of the role of the nurse in contemporary society
Write a short narrative piece that provides a logical and persuasive discussion
Adhere to academic presentation requirements, including spelling, punctuation, grammar, and referencing
High Distinction (HD)
The narrative clearly analyses and synthesises personal ideas with the chosen image.
The narrative provides a logical and persuasive discussion. Concepts are well structured with a good flow of ideas. Ideas are integrated well to make for an enlightening read.
The paper is virtually free from punctuation, spelling or grammatical errors. Appropriate academic language is used, with excellent word choice. Accurate referencing of sources used both in-text and in the reference list. List and in-text references match.
The narrative synthesises personal ideas with the chosen image.
The narrative provides a logical and persuasive discussion.
Most concepts are well structured to flow from idea to the next.
Ideas are integrated well to make for an enlightening read. Some areas could be clarified a little more.
Mainly correct spelling and grammar; may have a few small errors. Appropriate academic language is used, with good word choice. Referencing is correct apart from minor errors either in-text or in reference list. List and in-text references match.
The narrative makes some clear links between personal ideas and the chosen image.
The narrative presents a good discussion. Most concepts follow in a logical sequence. Most ideas are clearly explained, although some areas need further clarification.
A few spelling and/or grammar errors, and/or slang/ colloquialisms or unusual word choice. Referencing is mainly correct apart from minor errors both in-text and in reference list. Small errors in matching.
The argument attempts to link personal ideas to the chosen image; however, the explanation is tenuous or unclear in many areas.
The narrative presents a good discussion. However, not all concepts follow a logical flow.
Some ideas are a little vague.
The explanation does not clearly link personal ideas to the chosen image.
Some grammatical/ spelling mistakes and/or use of colloquialisms. Incorrect word choice in places. Referencing is inconsistent, with errors both in-text and in reference list OR mis-matching.
The narrative fails to provide a logical and/or persuasive discussion. The paper lacks of structure and makes meaning hard to follow. Ideas lack meaningful interpretations.
Multiple punctuation, grammar and formatting errors that affect readability; OR written entirely in colloquial style that is inappropriate for academic work; OR uses incorrect / own style of referencing OR does not reference any sources.